Thanks very much Windchime. Your comment opened up a whole new perspective for me. The idea for this came from all the people whinging about whose fault the tsunami was while people were dying in the rubble. Anyway, you have a talent for writing beautiful comments as well as poetry.
nail on the head
you hit the nail on the head 14 words yet so explosive and explanatory nice job.Try your hand you could do good at writing loglines incase you may get to screen writing sometime.
Thanx for comments you made on it boosted my morale to improve it thanks "Auditor" synopsis check out the newly posted especially "hold on humble yourself"synopsis and tell me what you think of the story line
Posted by: karugaj [Member] On: January 20, 2005
Emlyn Questions Tragedy
I didn't expect the words to be presented in this manner always thought it had to be 5-7-5 formatted structure...I am earnestly trying to learn all the "rules" of Haiku. This asks all the big questions about tragedy.
Posted by: ladyngold [Member] On: June 3, 2005
Thank you very much for the kind comment, lng. I must admit I know little about Haiku but they can be quite fun to play around with.