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Whenever you leave, i just wanna hold on tight
I wish you could be near me every day and night
waking up to your soft touch, and light of your face
is one special moment i'll forever embrace
i'll always remember the times, when all we did was laugh
and when we're together, it feels like we're on our own path
but this path is different, its beautiful and clear
you'll always be with me, even when you're not here
all those little obstacles, we seem to push away
cause nothing else matters, nothing that they say
no matter how they try, they just can't tear us apart
because our connection is special, we're linked by the heart.


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The following comments are for "Solid Ground"
by IamMEdontTRYtoCHANGEit

solid ground
when I read such kind of poems in which a girl describe moments she spent with her lover ..or when she laments this moments...what comes to my mind is that this girl must be a teenager..
and here I am ..I read your profile and was surprised a little bit u r onlt fifteen ..your poems are well written and that what made me surprised...u have a good talent and by time i am sure you will be able to use it to describe more essential and greater topics...[I am not underestimating ur writing here..] but all I wanted to say..that this piece made me felt u r a teenager..
c what I mean?/
All the best in life and I am sorry for ur hard time u had...we all go thru hard moments ..but we should hang on to the line of life by having some patience!!


( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: January 5, 2005 )

All I can say is.......
Take care
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: Ogg [Member] On: January 6, 2005 )

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