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Here’s to you Wally Marie,
sometimes called Pontoof by me.
Then there are times we see Loofy
when digging like hell; acting goofy.

And often it’s Schlomo we see.
Each night Ellis sleeps with me.
Sometimes you are Woodrow;
Woody for short…

Occasionally little Alice will wheeze or snort.
The Prince of St. Petersburg struts to the vet.
El O’ El can be a rambunctious twit.

Sir Woodness you’re a valuable cuss,
known by numerous names to us.
We call you Al and Wallace too,
You answer to all our names for you.

Though it’s Elwood you were born to be,
but here’s to you, Wally Marie.



------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Here’s To You Wally Marie"
by Char

Char: The Prince of St Pete..
..How sweet!...That brought a smile. Thanks.


Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 3, 2005 )

wally mary
sweet and light
and I found it more lyric then a poetry

good job


all the best
Fairgrace

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: January 3, 2005 )

wally marie
How light and airy in description, like a Dicken's book condensed to poetry. Very well done Char!

( Posted by: jade [Member] On: January 4, 2005 )

Char's little man,
Elwood is a lucky little man to have trained his human loves so well.
This is warming to read. I honestly think you could do a series on your Chihauhaus alone. Your 3 lucky companions.
Very well done Char.
Pleasant memories born.

Dar xo

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: January 23, 2005 )

dogalyst
Hey,cool stuff. A fun change of pace. Tastes great,less filling. Than Q for stopping by and commenting on "The body,the blood." Keep the fire burning, fellow stalwart scribe.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: April 10, 2005 )

Thanks
It's good to see you Metrozol. Thanks for stopping by. Glad you like Wally Marie. You should see him...cute as he can be and he knows how special he is, as do my other two Chihuahuas. They all have various names including, What. My dog Oz will answer to that. LOL!!! Take care...see you around.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: April 11, 2005 )





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