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lost inspiration no where near
persperation starting fear
death and life start the fire
my heart preaching to an empty choir
soon to end a loseing fight
running fast into the night
sweat now running down my face
putting aggony in its place
fealing fast for my lost true love
praying to the holy lord above
i can't remember a word i said
it may be lord please strike me dead
i see a light that's not too clear
membled words that i can't hear
day id done and spent away
and still i don't know what to say

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~trish~

dearest lord...thank you for my friends who care, the ones who help me when i have the smallest look of sorrow on my face. <3.


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