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While riding like a twig
on the shoulders of a stream
One can think
what could have been.

Just go with the flow,

Even the roughest waters
can lead to calmer seas.

So open your mind
and let yourself float
Because even in nature
there is always a process
that we too must follow.

Like the water along its shores
there are no boundaries
Only the gentle stroking
of new things to come.

By Amy Rachelle Small

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The following comments are for "Go with the Flow"
by hedgehog

very good
I really liked this one, we are usually taught to go with the flow, and you have a very amusing poem here about it.
Keep up the good work!

( Posted by: amusedlilboy [Member] On: January 2, 2005 )

Welcome Amy. I very much enjoyed this piece as well as your other. Nice first impressions you have made, and I shall be watching for others as well. By the way I love your pen name, Hedgehog!

( Posted by: CJHerlihy [Member] On: January 4, 2005 )

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