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A thousand lives between you and I
Have you met another one of me
For every new one I become,
An old one has to die
I am a little sorry for that
Just between you and I
A thousand lives
I never liked the company

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The following comments are for "1st time"
by Adam Fever

re: 1st time
I saw this in a re-incarnation perspective. From that, having the person come to the understanding that maybe the other person is not important in these incarnations was well said.

( Posted by: zebralicious [Member] On: May 16, 2002 )

Hey that was beautiful work I loved it.

( Posted by: DarkMagic [Member] On: May 17, 2002 )

circular motion
This poem did kind of have sort of a circular motion to it--sort of implying to me that it pertained to reincarnation.

( Posted by: Susan Sparks [Member] On: October 18, 2003 )

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