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thrown stone, an echo's "splash"
slow fall to the river bed
smooth surface, without wave


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Smile if you're stupid,
laugh if you understand.


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The following comments are for "Tranquility"
by Bartleby

Tranquillity
My memory of the way Haiku works is vague but isn't the second line supposed to have 17 syllables?

( Posted by: Dfortyseven [Member] On: April 30, 2005 )

17 syllables? Haiku
The most common form of Haiku is 5-7-5 syllables, each line to stand on it's own.

There are many forms of Haiku. Call the attention of our friend here Teflon....or even put on a blog asking for help on Haiku forms.
Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 30, 2005 )

Dfortyseven, here is a good link
http://www.columbia.edu/itc/eacp/asiasite/topics/index.html?topic=Haiku+subtopic=Intro

I found this helpful,,,that is if you are interested in Haiku forms.

Bart, nice to read this. Wondered where you've been.
Nice Haiku.

Thanks for sharing,
Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 30, 2005 )





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