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In time
I wanted to remember
But I can't...
I wanted to forget and I did,
Or maybe the memory
never was logged
In my foggy mind.

How did it go down?
What did she say?
What did I say?
What an ass I was.
Yes what a fucking ass,
I surely must have been.
I'll Never know.

Months later,
She says to me,
We were drunk.
I know I was,
I always was.
Maybe she too.
I'll never know.

Rick you only loosen up
When you're drunk. Why?
Little sister asks.
Am I that way?
In sister's loving eyes,
Am I that way?
I'm not that way!
Thats not who I am!
Thats not who I was,
Or is it?
I'll never know.

This image
Who I am,
A jigsaw puzzle of
Foggy fragments of memory
That's not Rick.
This voice says,
Thats not you.
Its not?
It wasn't?
Is this voice
for real?
I'll Never Know.

There she was
in the kitchen
or was it the bedroom?
With some married guy.
She found another
Who is another's.
Is his mind is foggy too?
Self Medicated first
On fine tasting ales then
Kegger cups
And fortys of the cheap stuff?

His is a heart problem.
The cruel fuck.
Can't she see?
He's screwing his wife,
Will he screw her too?
I'll nver know.

You're married you basturd.
Stay away.
She's mine.
So what if she wants you.
You'll bring her heart acke
What she sees in him,
I'll never know.

There she goes.
Long black hair,
Flowing in the breeze.
Get a brain bucket woman!
She's here, come to collect
Sid's unused brain bucket,
Fuck...Did I ask...Sid?
I'll Never Know.

Action equals Reaction.
A mind made foggy on fine tasting ales,
long island ice tea and margaritas.
Fuck! What a God Damn waste...
Precious irretreivable days.
What could have been?
What should have been?
I'll Never know.



The following comments are for "Ode to Lori Lee"
by UCDavisBikeWriter

There is so much emotion in it that it overrides spelling(acke, irretreivable, nver)and crudeness. Crudeness may be licensed by the emotions, but if they are well-interpreted and arranged, which is not quite there. But it is almost there.

Straighten up and fly right,


( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: January 2, 2005 )

I am honestly confused, is this about Gentlemen Prefer Blondes or a real life experience?

*puzzled look*

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: January 2, 2005 )

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