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This is a still life
photograph of a Bible
and a grain of salt


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The following comments are for "Haiku Photograph 1."
by johnjohndoe

JJD: Mother F-er
How do you consistently manage to blow out these spit-wads of greatness? Hot diggity! What's your secret? Tell me! Tell me now! I'll give you a shiny penny...? Name your price, Devil!

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( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: December 27, 2004 )

Evocative imagery.
A potent haiku.

( Posted by: veganmaster [Member] On: December 27, 2004 )

potent spitwads
No doubt, this cute haiku packs a realistically surrealistic message.

Preserve the formula.

Regards,

Telefling.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: December 27, 2004 )





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