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Your last in our midst
Was a very heavy day.
A tin sign, soon to be orphaned,
Slapped at an urgent wind,
Giving it an eerie voice as it rumbled through.
Furiously pitching razored tumbleweeds aside,
It hurled a foreboding in horrified faces.

Hoping for pardon
We sat blind staring,
We paced new ruts in the floor and retraced them,
Talking in dead whispers,
Trying not to and waiting to cry.
There could be no stillness as the howling air,
Against the dolorous box
Which held us together one last time,
Breathed.

And this was the time chosen
For the box to be ripped open,
When a locomotive wind would carry you away
In its sand-laden wake.


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The following comments are for "An Overweight Day"
by TamiJane

Thanks Grey
This poem is about the day my father was dying. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and perhaps this explanation will help you see all its implications. Saying goodbye to a loved one is so difficult, and the weather that day was so fitting.

( Posted by: TamiJane [Member] On: December 29, 2004 )





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