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On the edge of eternity
stand by me.
the space between
yesterdays cruel day.

On the brink of the stars
hold each finger tightly.
the distance we trace
led us here.

At the end of the world,
kiss with knowing embrace,
the end we found
was merely our beginning.


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The following comments are for "the illusia chronicles...A standing love affair of, anguish among the stars I"
by DEMONeyesBLUE

illusia - DEB
In such longing poetry is where my soul lives, Tom/Mac. I love this piece and so is the other one after this part.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: May 4, 2005 )





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