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her resilience
all those painful years
paid off


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Not the poem which we have read, but that to which we return, with the greatest pleasure, possesses the power and claims the name of essential poetry.


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The following comments are for "Strength comes (Haiku - freestyle, modern)"
by Huni

free style
and very good. i like this one very much. you can feel it.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: December 27, 2004 )

Windchime, bobby, chapter, JJD.
thanks for coming to read this. And the great ratings. You are right Lucie (as usual!) I wanted it to be read bath ways. JJD, pleased it made you feel - that's what haiku should do - yes? huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: December 28, 2004 )





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