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it took no time for me to die
it was so quick you made me cry
it was so slow i began to see
the dark tunnel infront of me
as i said goodbye to my dreadful heart
i memorized my lifes every part
as i said hello to the hell now here
i do not try and shed a tear
i am not saddened because i am dead
i do not think this is all in my head
im glad its real. i lost that night
never again will i put up a fight
i will let go of whats inside
every inch of my false pride
say goodbye to my tortured soul
loseing fast to my self control
the night is over and so is my life
im never going t be anyones wife
i am now forever gone
you think you did nothing wrong
you'll never see me ever again
i am hell and your all in heaven
so say your goodbye's and walk away
forget that you wont see me the next day
this night i over i have left
this was for you so think of it as a gift


dearest lord...thank you for my friends who care, the ones who help me when i have the smallest look of sorrow on my face. <3.

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