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there are times when death
doesnt seem bad
you wana be happy
and can only be sad
you cry in pain
from a broken heart
that was once fixed
at the start
but love is hate
in many ways
i want to cry
throughout the days
depression coming
oh so quick
you want to die
its oh so sick
death is coming
soon to be near
look at my life
death is here


dearest lord...thank you for my friends who care, the ones who help me when i have the smallest look of sorrow on my face. <3.

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