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Tom Lennon a well of to do male auditor has everything an ordinary single guy in early twenties would want success cash and a well off paying job. But all that is about to change instantly in a single morning.

Driving along a lone highway in Idaho in an auditing firm he works called Lent auditors, in between the lone detour shortcut he takes to get to work early he spots a small uno car partly covered by shrubs. He gets of his car to get a better view of the occupant. To his amazement, he encounters Mary jenas a pregnant woman in her late twenties who was struggling to get to the hospital he takes her to his car to the maternity. The pains labor and birth proves too hard for miss jenas as she dies in the birth process.

In the ensuing confusion, the hospital staff registered the kid as Tom Lennon Junior as they assume tom Lennon is the father. After one month in the nursery the kid is released to Tom Lennon who even has no idea on taking care of toddlers leave alone kids. When daycare in one month drains all his monthly savings he pulls out of it to and opts to take care of junior alone even if it means juggling his auditing with changing the baby diapers in the office.

There is trouble ahead a new sexy lady Sally Watson has been hired to replace the redeployed boss of Lennon, John Barry. He reports to her, which means that Sally Watson takes keen interest in Lennon’s work being the boss. The crazy thing is that Tom has heard on occasions Sally confess that he hates anything that has to deal with toddlers and that due to her career she will adopt a ten year old junior.

This is crazy Tom has to take care of the kid in the office secretly without raising any suspicion to anybody about the kid more so to her boss. Meanwhile the two Sally and Lennon have some secret love chemistry between them but neither wants to admit but when the toll of taking care of the baby creeps in Tom work deteriorates and he is summoned more over his poor work record. Sally begins to investigate by frequenting Toms office at times he is hit by pungent smell of baby faeces but Tom saves his day by giving flimsy excuses by sometimes saying he has a stomach problem because of eating beans thus he is farting badly.

Tom troubles pile up especially in the mornings when he has to evade his shopkeeper where he has accumulated debts such that one morning he had to go to work in a boxer shorts after the lady shopkeeper ripped his trousers as collaterals for failing to pay promptly and he had to present an audit report in boxers hiding behind curtains to hide his hairy legs but was discovered and the firms reputation went to the dogs.
By then Tom takes up some other careers to get money for the baby after work he works as a construction worker between five to six thirty in the evening while between twelve noon to one thirty he sneaks out of the office as a dance choreographer a crazy career he invents to make some extra cash to feed the kid yet he has no idea on dance moves.

Due to his weird operations the boss Sally decides to investigate his movements after trying to milk the information from Tom why of late he is acting so loopy. She is in for a rude shock when he realizes that Tom the man is a single parent of a kid even though not by choice. This turns the boss Sally gentle and all over sudden she gets her maternal instincts turned on by Tom’s commitment to taking care of junior Tom.

Things turn to be funny when Tom realizes the secret is out and sally visits him at the construction site. After having hot soup poured accidentally on his head at the site he goes bonkers and shouts at the top of his voice to sally “I love yah sally I could kiss your unshaven armpits”

Their love blossoms instantly and they are to wed in another fun studded event where they wed in water after tom is accidentally pushed in water by sally's mum and the preacher has to conduct the mass in water. Sally quits the job to care for then one-year-old Lennon while for the first time since juniors birth life of Lennon senior makes some sense when he gets to his old auditors job with minimal interferences


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The following comments are for "auditor"
by karugaj

When he hears Skinner's lame exaggerations
This is a very VERY funny idea and I could see the images in my head of Tom rearing the baby in his office. In think you could make a good comedy from this especially Toms lame but sincere excuses.

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: January 7, 2005 )

on auditor synopsis i did appreciate your comments do you think any company would appreciate the whole script


( Posted by: karugaj [Member] On: January 18, 2005 )

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