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We silenced our mind,
No more steps were taken,
The glory faded away,
We fed our fears,
And grieved in the pain,
We slept with the sick and gave way to futility,
We tortured ourselves to the brink of incineration,
Yet we live to another day,
For this small thing,
And it has destroyed us all.

I bet that cost money.

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The following comments are for "The Sky Lit In Ashes"
by theDecade

wicked bro, thats some really deep stuff, its always good when people talk about how screwed we really all are nice one man.

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: December 22, 2004 )

hey man, did u make that avatar?

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: December 22, 2004 )

Thanks. I write alot of abstract things, so i think different people will see it differently.

Yeah, I made my avatar.

( Posted by: theDecade [Member] On: December 22, 2004 )

avatar again
dude it would be really swell if would wanna make me an avatar.

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: December 22, 2004 )

Well I could, depends on what you want on it and all that, what do you want it to look like?

ehh this is weird commenting on my own thing haha oh well dont know where else to go.

( Posted by: theDecade [Member] On: December 22, 2004 )

David ...
this poem had me picturing fire fighters, soldiers, anyone who pushes themselves to be who they are. I like it and agree with demonblue, this feels deep to me. regards huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: December 28, 2004 )

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