The following comments are for "Seemingly Elegant" by Vinceypoo
These are great flash thoughts. You have several options with these, and without decreasing the creative spirit, I see that you can mold these flashes into a poem, several haikus, or even a flash verses. To detail:
"Nonchalant chatter. Beautifully poised.
Your words never refrain.
C flat, F sharp, it's all the same.
Subtle keystrokes playing upon words.
Smiles filled with emotion.
Emotions lay unsaid."
The above objects are great as backbones for haiku. Or they maybe conjoined into a short poem.
"Anger.Disdain.Lust.Joy?" could be a haiku.
You could have great lots of fun doing this.
Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: January 2, 2005
Thanks for the comment :) It occured to me. I've just never been much of a Haiku fan..I think it's my being spoiled by writing long stories and need more description! >:)
Posted by: vinceypoo [Member] On: January 2, 2005
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