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Oh yeah! I bet everyone misses me already. My last poetry submission was dated when, December 10? But guys you need not suffer anymore because I have a new post which I think you may have just missed. Check out this page: Oh, yeah, it’s okay now I understand. There are lots of things to do like shopping for Christmas and shoveling snow and reading the write-offs (but look—I myself took time rating and commenting and yet still had time writing part 5 of PenPals) and I don't know what else, Oh my gulay!

PenPals, you bet I believe in it! It wouldn’t have survived till this last installment if it were any sack of crap! But hey, I really regret that I may have pissed off the other critics but I honestly would like to hear what they are going to say about the next parts. Come on guys! Don’t you easily give up on us! Nope, nope, I am not begging… And how about those who read the first parts? Huni, Jeannie, where art thou?

(Sigh) It seems I really don’t have anything poetic to write. Not even an artistic way of begging. Trying to be funny but… But you see, I don't give up.


crystal face I kiss
tongue tastes like sweet cold rain
I fall into pond

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The following comments are for "I Bet You Missed Me"
by Peterpaulino

Guilty as charged Peter
So unsag your sweet self and get back to giving us some more of your lovely perfumed poetry. I have been watching. I read a lot of stuff here I don't comment on. Sorry. I will go back and comment on the Pen-Pals later tonight. I am enjoying them by the way. You are both, some of my favourite people and writers on here, plus I'm a voyeur at heart. ~smile~ love - huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: December 18, 2004 )

I was going into withdrawal! Looking forward to your new post . . .

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 18, 2004 )

Demeter, Huni, Viper
Lady-oh! You are a sweetheart really, but what is Chutzpah? Guts? Like you are 'The Tough Cookie'? LOL! Okay, you don't want me to beg you, tell me what it is!

Huni, I'm really gona count on that Gypsy! But I'm sorry you cannot count on my new poem - I am still in a haze. No poetry is entering my head... My muse has forsaken me... :(

Viper, you heard it man... no new poetry, sorry. You are stuck with PenPals, blah!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: December 19, 2004 )

Yes, I missed you Peter
and I still last submission was somewhere in October.

Thanks for the warm wishes in my email.....very nice Peter.

Keep writing and let that ink flow free with that great mind of yours,

Darlene ((((hugs)))

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: December 23, 2004 )

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