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I cannot let it go.
The memory tumbles and heaves in my mind.
I cannot look past it.
I struggle to force my way past it-
But it stays.

On the surface it is just the same,
with big empty hands that grab
at whatever lies within its reach.
It whirls and spins with the hunger
that drives it,
And it will not let me go.


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The following comments are for "Hungry Memory"
by TamiJane

Tamijane
I know this feeling well, it always seems to happen to me right while I am trying to get some sleep or right when I need my mind to focus on something important.

Thank you for sharing this.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: December 21, 2004 )

Alex
That's what the darn thing does to me too! Thanks for the comment.

( Posted by: TamiJane [Member] On: December 21, 2004 )





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