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Oh beautiful Alice come to me
Seeing your eyes fills me with glee
I want to touch you
Our flesh will connect
Now your mine….

Oh bitter sweet Alice come to me
I want to touch you
Your will is gone
So go to the bed!

Oh clever Alice come to me
“Oh Alice, why is your dress tainted with blood?”
“Nevermind that,Shall we dine?”
“I have a present for you” She smiled
Oh bitter sweet Alice walks up to him, she stabs him with a knife!
“Now your mine….”


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