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God and the devil
wage war on this mortal plane
what side will you choose?

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The following comments are for "Good and Evil"
by TheGreatSage

side by side
When choosing your side
on moral war's mortal plane
are you sure you're right?

I like yours.
Mine- not so much, but I had to anyway.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: December 18, 2004 )

Good haiku
Frankly, I've never been able to tell the difference between the two.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 19, 2004 )

first off, thanks for the comments! Yet secondly, I think that it's kind of funny that everyone who has comment is either for evil, or it's a draw between the two choices.

Made me laugh. Thanks again.

( Posted by: TheGreatSage [Member] On: December 19, 2004 )

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