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It's in there waiting. Waiting so impatiently. Bursting to get out and scream to the world. Screams so loud and clear. Making heads spin, creating a new insanity. Thoughts of craziness fly by, going at speeds of the firefly. The power is so strong to control, the world just has to know.....

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The following comments are for "Inside me"
by jazmine marie harbor

Heh-heh,yeah,me too. Cool piece. This could really
work as a poem,too,if you broke it up into individual lines. Enchanting that you would give thoughts of craziness in flight the speed of a firefly - although they just kinda saunter around
like they're drunk,their gluteus illuminous sure
have a nifty way of hypnotizing you into playful
states of inspired lunacy. Scream it out or spontaneously combust. Nice work.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: December 20, 2004 )

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