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Turmoil,strife,
upheaval in my life.
Somewhere within...
...I possess the strength.
Been a long time cominí.
Deep within itís bubbliní.
Slowly risiníto the surface.
In exchange for a sacrifice.
In this game of life...
...alone I must find myself
To quell the dragons in my id.
For peace and free to express.
She and I must part ways.
No longer cause her pain.
Time to heal is what I need.
Having found renewed intensity.
My quest for me takes a new path.
No regrets and no looking back.


------
CJ Herlihy


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The following comments are for "Strength"
by cjherlihy

Catharsis
Pain breeds creativity. It shows in this poem. Write some more for us, to get it out of the system.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: December 19, 2004 )

Thank you all......
...for your comments, compliments and constructive suggestions....
It was a good feeling getting this out on paper....and i shall try to seek out those that seem less cliche vodka....

( Posted by: cjherlihy [Member] On: December 20, 2004 )





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