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Some way, some how I must make my presence known to you
I must reach you and talk to you from the beyond
Even in death my love for you remains, I must get to you so you suffer no more pain
I have to make sure you know to me you still belong.

I must reach you so I cam help dry your hurtful tears
Even from death, I can't stand to see you cry
When you acknowledge me, you have no need to fear
I would never hurt you, you know I could never stand to see you cry.

I am reaching out to you, please take my hand
I want you to know I am fine and I still love you so
No more tears, no need to cry, please take my hand
Dry your tears, and understand I didn't want to go.

If I had had a choice, I would have remained with you forever and a day
But believe, even in the realm of death, together we shall always be
Forever, my love, by your side I shall always remain
This is why you need to acknowledge my presence, see.

So from my realm I reach out to console you, and try to make it better
I don't want to see a tear streaked face
So dry your tears, as I try to help you find the happiness that within you stirs
So acknowledge my presence so I may bring a smile to your sad sad face.

Lanaia Lee

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The following comments are for "My Presence"
by abbey74

It is surely dramatic. But I am not scared. What is hottific here? I think it is a bit funny:

"I have to make sure you know to me you still belong.

I must reach you so I cam help dry your hurtful tears"

As if it is a college senior talking to a higschool girl. But this may be due to my clownish worldview.



( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: December 16, 2004 )

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