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Romeo Romeo
Save me from this place
Are you here to rescue me?
I've been waiting to see your face

Romeo Romeo
Watch out for the beast
If you slay the dragon
I will be realeased

Romeo Romeo
You are almost there
If I were Rapunzel
I would let down my hair

Romeo Romeo
This is all just pretend
But I wish you came sooner
For now is my end


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by 7MidniteTears

aww
thats sweet but different. the ending is deep, deep like a lake.

ToM

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: December 20, 2004 )





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