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author's note: I collaborated on this with furius on AIM. Whether it makes sense or not doesn't matter because it's freestyling. Hopefully this will be read and commented on.

shadowKreepe: this beat is for something
Ickyomm: strange confounded facts
shadowKreepe: keeping in tacts
Ickyomm: after no gracious time of light
shadowKreepe: I知 passing at night
Ickyomm: like flitting burning shadow
shadowKreepe: how I remember
Ickyomm: that maybe perhaps once
shadowKreepe: I might have had a chance
Ickyomm: to be there
shadowKreepe: forever
Ickyomm: living in blessed moment
shadowKreepe: keeping your ornament
Ickyomm: and not knowing time
shadowKreepe: to maybe hearing your chime
Ickyomm: of repetitive words and ancient rhyme
shadowKreepe: it's all the same
Ickyomm: hear utterance sweet cruel useless words
shadowKreepe: man I can't believe it
Ickyomm: turning in ever widening gyre
shadowKreepe: only to inspire
Ickyomm: hideous laughter, mocking smile
shadowKreepe: I知 dreaming, heaving for your love
Ickyomm: everything that came to blank
shadowKreepe: I知 breathing forever
Ickyomm: whiteness blackness molded together
shadowKreepe: the life, the death, the pain, the love
Ickyomm: subtle passion's play and song
shadowKreepe: the long of solitude
Ickyomm: nothing around and airy emptiness
shadowKreepe: but what they don't know is...
Ickyomm: no one ever said the words but
shadowKreepe: I will now
Ickyomm: let me breathe and say
shadowKreepe: they don't know, who I am
Ickyomm: and will not if they know
shadowKreepe: the friends, the foes, the dirt, the slain
Ickyomm: of closed years
shadowKreepe: my tears
Ickyomm: trembling
shadowKreepe: shaking
Ickyomm: tumbling
shadowKreepe: fumbling
Ickyomm: clumsiness filled
shadowKreepe: unruly hilled
Ickyomm: glistening thrills
shadowKreepe: my mom, my dad, I love them, I hate them
Ickyomm: all in matter of time and view
shadowKreepe: I値l break them, shake them
Ickyomm: caring not for transparent gem
shadowKreepe: cursing I have them
Ickyomm: blessings I give unbidden
shadowKreepe: yet praying I love them
Ickyomm: yet wishing and hoping
shadowKreepe: and needing to gain
Ickyomm: feeling burning rain
shadowKreepe: I don't need to be mean
Ickyomm: there the natural grace reign
shadowKreepe: sometimes I need to be left alone, in this world of ours
Ickyomm: away and in another place of glorious allure
shadowKreepe: I知 so sick and tired of being looked down at
Ickyomm: pasting brokenness and always wishing
shadowKreepe: that life would be a matter of pissing
Ickyomm: no unwieldy words to write and no tongue-lashing
shadowKreepe: they look and they point
Ickyomm: speaking in soft fast voices
shadowKreepe: to only shut in eternal hell
Ickyomm: burned by their own design
shadowKreepe: in those pits of fire
Ickyomm: lakes of sulfur
shadowKreepe: nothing duller
Ickyomm: more pale bland
shadowKreepe: nothing is grand
Ickyomm: upon a colored land
shadowKreepe: covered by sand
Ickyomm: coarse to a disdainful hand

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