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I look at the mirror
And what do i see
A girl who is crying
Right in front of me

I try to make her
Just stop her tears
But shes kept this going
Through all the years

She breaks the mirror
The glass shattered
I tried to ask
What was the matter

Tears droppin uncontrolably
Trying to make her stop
But all i could do is
Just watch her tears drop

She fell to the ground
And cut herself from the pieces
She watched the blood drop
And the drips just increases

I try to save her
But its too late
She died because
She was full with hate


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