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Colored shapes
Shrouded in the brightest light
Show a sign of a lie to self
The truth been hidden in masked emotion
The consequences are singular unto me

Molded shapes
Geometric standard
Color constants
Connecting lines
Green and blue and red are holding
A force of life or sacrifice

I’ve seen
We’ve seen
The lights’ separation holding
A path
Our path
I’ve betrayed to determine
A vacuum in
A light without
The universe is smaller than everything now

The people influence has changed me
Not my self
I love
I hate
Trapped in a fate (shape)
A legacy or…
Freedom of will (force)
A light,
A color …

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The following comments are for "Universes of geometric shapes have definite colors"
by themonster

themonster: geometry
Sometimes I like poetry just for the same reason I like some music: it sounds good. I like the combinations of words. I like the combinations of notes and rhythyms. This is one of those works. It makes me not want to un-tangle it. I like the abstractness of it that may deliver it's message to me out of context in a dream some night. And I'll have no idea where it came from. So please take credit in advance, as I will not know to give it to you when it is due.


( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: December 13, 2004 )

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