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Cleaning routine
Routine
Routine
Days merging into dull weeks
Mop toilet floor
Dust over doors
Monday bed-linen change
Always Monday
Every Monday
Routine
Routine
Losing my grip
Wanna scream
“I’m sick of this fucking routine.”

Dead eyes watching me from dead rooms
from dead tables and dead chairs
my mini-rebellion skiving on Friday afternoons
Every Friday, always Friday
Then wait for Monday’s return

Back to
Routine
Routine
Cleaning routine



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In five hundred years time, most of us will be forgotten dust. But Hitler will still be remembered, God loves irony.


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