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Oh, how I hate
Life as it is

Oh, how I hate
The thoughts of showbiz

Oh, how I hate
Living in sin

Oh, how I hate
When it all ends

Oh, how I hate
The feeling of that

Oh, how I hate
When tires go flat

Life is a ride
That never seems to end

Oh, how I hate
When my mind starts to bend..

Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?

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