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Sometimes you just need to bleed to clean
and cleanse yourself from things you didn't mean
when you're up to your neck in everyone else's mess
the weight of the world is no longer just a test
but you can't let it go, you can't shake it off
the water keeps rising, rough is the cloth
sometimes you just need to bleed to clean
and cleanse yourself from things you didn't mean
you just wanna pass out, and deny your existence
but you won't give into your father's resistance
your life is burning like a fire on a feather
and nothing seems it will ever get better
and sometimes you just need to bleed to clean
to cleanse yourself from the things you didn't mean

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<<-Hillary->>


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