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Did the air of the heavens and the earth just speak to me?
Oh...it was you, saying "I love you" to me.
Did the mountains tremble in time with my heartbeat?
Oh...it was you, saying "I love you" to me.
Did the water in the ocean caress my soul?
Oh...it was you, saying "I love you" to me.
Did the rain give my thirsty heart a needed drink?
Oh...it was you, saying "I love you" to me.
Why do all these things compare? Why do all these things surround my soul?
It is always because of you,
and the way you say,
I love you.

------
Michelle Wright



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The following comments are for "The Way You Say I Love You"
by snoopygurlisme

Very Nice
I like it a lot, but then again i like anything involving love, great job none the less

( Posted by: Jadahaze30 [Member] On: December 10, 2004 )





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