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It wouldn't hurt so bad
If it was anyone but her
If I hadn't been her friend
And sacrificed for both of you

It wouldn't be so wrong
If you hadn't hurt him too
If he had never loved her
And had not forgiven too much

I wouldn't have cried
If you had only known
I cried because she knew
And that just makes it worse

It wouldn't be so odd
If everytime I tried to place blame
If everytime I pointed a finger
I wasn't pointing at myself

I've been trying to change my avatar for four years...

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