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Sobbing and crying
I sink slowly to the floor

Please God, help me
I just can't stand it anymore

I worry for him so much
In every single way

As if he were right here
And still alive today

I wish I could see him smile
And I long to hear his voice

But, Oh My God, it's true
He's gone and it was his choice

I never thought this would happen
God would never let this be

But let me tell you something
This really happened to me

Christine Hamor

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