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An image looms near, pureness, serene
Heavenly companion, outstretched hand
Gentle of smile, such warmth of her touch
An aura, mystical, guiding my way

Silent, she hovers, with watchful gaze
Blessed, His messenger, beckoning
An illusion perhaps, an answered prayer
Stay by my side, forever endeared

Silken her skin, unblemished by time
Wind caressed hair past shoulder fallen
Eyes of pearl white dispel of my pain
Uplifting, calmness envelops me whole

A gift from another I shall not forsake
Timeless beauty, a cast away dream
Bring unto me light, posess of me faith
My angel of hope, sacred, a friend

------
Don MacIver
Come on a journey with me...where eagles soar.


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