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I'm out,free at last.
Free from the tears and the scorn of the past.
The wind beneath my wings
whisp gentle and soft the love it brings.
No limits to the heights I soar,
from this dimension to another,
these wings of love my heart discovers.
The wind in my face, pure and free,
speaking loud and clear, "Fly with me."
From the tallest mountain I hear my name,
"Robin, free at last, fly high, forget the past."
On a cloud I rest my new freedom,
breathing the Creator deep within my heart,
ever thankful of my new start.


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The following comments are for "Free at Last"
by Robinbird

This poem..
Hi Robin... THis poem is good but it lacks flow and rhythm.. some lines are too long but none are too short.. also i think you couldve gone into more detail... fyi this isnt my first poem to read.. i read all the poems i can stand at www.poems-and-quotes.com..... thank you for all the comments you have given me.. later

( Posted by: OkStCowboy [Member] On: January 4, 2005 )

HeyCowboy/Free...
So glad to hear from you, and, yes, there is a story behind this. I have a horrible illness that I fight on a daily basis, referred to as Bi-
Polar Disorder or manic depression. Very complicated illness,but, "Free at Last", was written because this is how it feels when I have
remission. Such peace, freedom and gratitude I have for these times. Excellent that you do read
the other artists as time permits. Thank you
for your time and comment. Robinbird
.

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: January 4, 2005 )

What goes around...
comes around, in exact accord...whomever you are,
this is my Mother's poem...

EARTH
FIRE
WIND &
RAIN

I emailed KARMA and gave your name...It's out of my hands...Have fun...

ROBINBIRD

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 27, 2006 )





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