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"Note to Self (I can't do it)"

You don't remember how to say it
Do you?
Or are you afraid you don't know how to feel it
Are you?
You know you felt it for her...you think
Did you?

So go ahead because your heart is acting up again
It may once again be time to fall in love
So go ahead because you know she should get to hear it
So go ahead because you know you're feeling it

I L...
I L...
I L...
I Love...
I Love...
I Love...
Ahhh!

You really don't remember how to say it
Do you?
You really are afraid of the words
Aren't you?
Yeah you did feel it for her...you know it
What about this one?

So go ahead because your heart is acting up again
It may once again be time to fall in love
So go ahead because you know she should get to hear it
So go ahead because you know you're feeling it

It isn't something to throw around
But you're afraid to even pass it out
Even when you know where it is deserved with out a doubt

It starts with an "I"
And I begin to shake
Next add an "L"
I'm about to lose it
Followed by and "O"
Oh my gosh
You can't do it
Tears in your eyes
Can't go through with it

I L...
I L...
I L...
I Love...
I Love...
I Love...
Ahhh!
I can't do it


------
jimmy g--do you see my heart? it is lying on the floor.


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The following comments are for ""Note to Self (I can't do it)""
by JimmyAndHisRocket

note to jimmy....
w00t! :-)

(apologies for netgeek moment...)

this brings back memories of a specific girl for me - which is the sign of a good piece of writing. nice one.

Jonathan.

( Posted by: JonnyT [Member] On: December 7, 2004 )

i love.....this song.
I thought these lyrics were good..I especially liked the lines-
It isn't something to throw around
But you're afraid to even pass it out
Even when you know where it is deserved with out a doubt
....good work, and good to read a song from you again. nice job and keep it coming

( Posted by: ForLackofaBetterName [Member] On: December 7, 2004 )

jimmy... nice job
i really like this... especially:
It starts with an "I"
And I begin to shake
Next add an "L"
I'm about to lose it
Followed by and "O"
Oh my gosh
You can't do it
Tears in your eyes
Can't go through with it
i love how you tied in the "O" and OH, very nice.

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: December 7, 2004 )

Oh MY gosh!
Can I just say you constantly amaze me? Your skills as a writer are leave me in a state of awe. I was greatly amused by this song, can't wait to hear more from you!

Amy

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: December 7, 2004 )





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