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Hell
by thebeast (Member) - published: December 6, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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Defined as
something that we're
FORCED
to endure as
punishment
for our past transgressions

I woke up this morning
I'm alive

I'm in Hell


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by thebeast

so...
what you're trying to say is that we are paying for our sins every day just by living?

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: December 7, 2004 )

HELL
I don't know you and haven,t read any of your
other works but, this makes sense to me. If you
or anybody with any feeling or guilt about any
transgressions wakes up "alive" thus, hell on
earth. I liked it. Oh, yeah, now I,ll read some
of your other works.
Robinbird

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: December 8, 2004 )

damn straight
So true, so true. Though I've never come across Hell defined in such a way.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 8, 2004 )





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