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I will float here
calmly, quietly
on a beach just off shore
where the water starts to become blue
a beautiful crystal clear

I can be here
forever and never want to leave
and I will add my own salt
to the ocean out of
love, joy

and let the waters carry me
drifting to wherever
they wish me to go

"I like to think that the whole world is my friend"

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