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Nothing else matters
So long as you have talents
You can do it if you wish
To make a fine achievement

All the people look up
To you because they are
So devoted and dedicated
To the true genuine star

Nothing else matters
So long as you are happy
With so many attentions
You’ve got from so many

Someone else deserve
That kind of loving treats
Everyday you always get
Because you are charming

Nothing else matters
So long as you maintain
Your splendor forever
So you can keep the fame

Little did you know
As many as loves you get
As many as jealousy
You get from the restless

Nothing else matters
Since you get no anxiety
From the stress you deal
Since you get no such thing

As you might know
From the life experience
Nothing else lasts long
Despite the good attempt

Nothing else matters
So long as you’re aware of
That life can be very sweet
Without too much efforts



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What am I to say?


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The following comments are for "Nothing Else Matters"
by Hoax

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i love the title only because it is the title to one of my favorite metallica songs. are you sure you want to do that though?

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: December 7, 2004 )

Yup
Yeah, really. I think this whole thing was ruined by the inevitable comparison between this and Metallica's masterpiece. Don't get me wrong, I'm not a Metallica fanatic and they've really started to suck, but as heavy metal ballad things go, Nothing Else Matters kicked ass.

So... title killed it. I'd suggest reposting this with a new title.

( Posted by: xitwound117 [Member] On: December 7, 2004 )

yeah..i think he's right
i know i already commented but i do think you should change the title. xit is right.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: December 8, 2004 )





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