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We may not see each other
Again in the world
Id like to say a few words
To strongly remind you
That you are the one I adore
And always will have
Until then I look at the picture

I take another look at the past
The happier times
I had with you for the last
Before you left me
Traumatized alone in the dark
Hoping you return
To mend my broken heart

I cry often for the reason
No one loved me
As much as you more often
I desired you so
I felt like I was in heaven
Now youve gone
There is nothing to happen

I only need to ask you why
You left me early
To ask myself every night
That it was my fault
I was unable to look inside
Of you in attempt
To fly away from my life

What am I to say?

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