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She kissed my tender harp
Dusk dews myst I taste it's spice
Holy cloth rims thru her abyss
I grip Cupid-nector's naked reach

Lady arch your wish above gloom
Splashes from a cancered yawn
I do hear a verbal bliss echo cracks
Shall drown in leaks of angle myths

Equipt dawn and ruby lead
Please shade me autumn's helm
Dose more of your bitter youth
I'll then fall into fantasty

Love spice but little salt
Love sweet thought not sour
Do I cause you to quench?



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