The following comments are for "What Love Is" by londongrey
I like what you've got, though it's short and I'm not sure I'm catching everything you're intending to convey.
Why trading salt and water? I get the sense you're implying a delta where fresh water meets the ocean? Or perhaps a salt shaker and a water glass on a diner table? Salient thoughts -- I wish you'd expand on them.
Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: December 5, 2004
Hazel and Lucie
Thank you for commenting.
Hazel I meant the harbour and its own reflection, it is up to you which one provides salt and which provides water.
Hope that makes sense.
Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: December 14, 2004
.:almost a haiku:.
very ingenious imagination. I think of inverse mirrors and virtual math. I think you are nearing the haiku wiring stage.
Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: December 16, 2004
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