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My life is miserable I never get my say
Its like everyone hates me, they always get their way
Why is it I'm asked to do the worst
I always strive to do my best but never get first
When I come close, I know they will run
My life is turning to crisp as i burn towards the sun
My life is a mess but no one knows it
I'm stuck in the corner should i kneel, stand or sit
They may listen but they don't hear
Do they know that my soul cries in fear
As my tears roll on my wet cheek
They look at me as if I am a freak
They look at my red eyes and do you know what they say?
They look me face to face and say GO AWAY!
As the quote goes "Its now or never"
Is it time? Right now? Should I pull the lever
The clock is tempting me as it goes tick-tock tick-tock
I'm like a sheep as I wander from the flock
This is the end, can I handle it?
Lets find out... in a little bit


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