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Reality comes crashing down
In the middle of the lake
People looking on with frowns
You feel like a fake

People know you secret now
no more places to hide
Only some people know how
They can be someone in who you confide

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The following comments are for "unreality"
by hbaybb

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I echo Jessicanm. This is very to the point and nicely done.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: May 5, 2002 )

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