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New lambs in baskets
cricket on the kitchen hearth
icy wind outside

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Not the poem which we have read, but that to which we return, with the greatest pleasure, possesses the power and claims the name of essential poetry.


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The following comments are for "winter"
by Huni

Cpt1 & Robinbird
Thank you both for reading and rating this one. This is a little vignette from my childhood. We would often come out to see lambs and other sundry animals being kept alive by mum at our big wood fired, kitchen range. I still love that image, knowing my dad was out in the night saving these little guys.. regards huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: December 4, 2004 )

Reordered lambs
I thought about this and I think to me this would be more haiku-dramatic :

icy wind outside
cricket on the kitchen hearth
New lambs in baskets

Tefl0n

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: January 5, 2005 )





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