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Iím still picking you out of my teeth
So please excuse my slurred speech
I havenít gotten over this after taste yet
Your taste still lingers on my lips

And those eyes, how could I forget
They will forever torment
Forcing me to remember
Everything that happened that October night

You kept me warm in your car
Fighting off the frost on my toes
Kissing my lips before they turned blue
The enemy keeping us close

Winter came so early this year
The leaves werenít even given a chance
If you gave me a chance to change
Just know Iíd never accept it
And probably rush to winter too

Sometimes I wonder if youíve forgotten
Those nights that keep me awake
Questioning your motives
And the smoothness of your hands

I just want you to know I hate these moments
Where youíre so close
Too close
Killing me because youíre in my reach
Just change your name and leave me behind
I wonder if thatíd even matter to me



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The following comments are for "grand am"
by ForLackofaBetterName

pontiac
one word: awesome. i really loved these lyrics. every line is right on. this is for sure my favorite work of yours. keep up the good work and don't quit writing for us.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: December 1, 2004 )

jimmy
Thanks, jimmy..it's always nice to get a good comment..esp on a song that means a lot to me. Of course I won't stop writing..I just hadn't gotten the chance to submit anything for a while. I'm looking forward to new stuff by you..

( Posted by: ForLackofaBetterName [Member] On: December 1, 2004 )





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