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In a secret moment, far, far away
Two lovers dance by the willow tree
Eyes gazing longingly, brief moments pass
Unspoken ballet, to chance but a kiss

Whispers of wind caress the night air
Moonlit romance, slip away, amour
Intimate closeness, impassioned embrace
Runaway heartbeats, free spirits unite

Fingertips trace vivid thoughts in minds eye
Moments of magic, captured, surreal
Fleeting, the images, crimson then fade
Precarious notions, forbidden, untold

Tears shed in anguish, painful goodbyes
Fingertips reach out for hands now cast down
Turning to flee from this beloved place
The night falls silent to end an affair

Don MacIver
Come on a journey with me...where eagles soar.

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