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I looked to the left
And then to the right
For miles and miles
Not a car was in sight

When I went to sit
I remembered last night
How I had a fit
And almost a fight

I wanted to be cool
And go to the party
Never did I know
Where it would have gotten me

My mom detested my leaving
My dad disapproved my date
My sisters did not believe
I would even be safe that late

I should've listened to my parents
I should've listened to my siblings
I should've listened to myself
I can't believe I didnt trust my instinct

I arrived at the party
All nice and prettied up
Holding hands with an athlete
And drinking from his cup

When my song came on
He pulled my towards him
We danced pretty close
Until I realized my sin

My head began to spin
My heart began to race
I felt the adrenaline
Rush to my face

I tried to sit down
But he wouldn't let me go
I begged and pleaded
But he just said 'NO'

Suddenly sirens went on
And people ran for the door
When I turned around
Even my date had left the floor

I tried to run
But it was too late
The cop had seen me
And I was gonna pay

I tried not to panic
And planned out what to say
But when he came near
My heart gave away

I woke up in the hospital
With nowhere to go
When the nurse asked for family
I simply told her 'No'

I left that place a while back
And here I am, this road
Why didnt I trust my instinct
And prevented all this from the go

Wait--what if I listen this time
To what's in my heart
Go home while I can
And prevent a disaster before it starts

------
~*Mamta*~


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