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Someone talk to the flea
That devout little guy
A quite religious bug
With salvation to buy

He knows what he thinks
And he thinks he knows all
Atop the hair of a human he sits
Attempting the creation of others’ fall

He’ll scream at the other fleas
And label them heretics
While laughing they name him
A hilariously mad lunatic

But he’ll sit there forever
With his heart of no fear
His sign held up high,
“The itch is near.”

Stay metal!

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The following comments are for "Manifest Itchery"
by xitwound117

WOW, you turned a serious subject into something light and funny. Unless you really are talking about fleas. Good job!


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: December 1, 2004 )

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